Residence of Haji Abdul Latif Khokar and Serwet Begum (Narang Mandi)

Pakistan / Punjab / Narang / Narang Mandi
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I was born, raised at this house(My Parents House)and stayed there till March 2003 before I moved to Canada. I may move place 2 place but this house will always have special place in my heart. I worte my early writtings in its small but beautiful house garden laid out by my Father.
From my memories treasure I am wondering to write one of my early poems which I worte while sitting in that house garden back in 1991.

AN EVENING AT NARANG

The air is calm
somewhat sweat,numbed with rain
Silence is prevailed all around
It feels so beautiful, so carefree
It reminds me Wordsworth
who had "The Beauteous Evening"
I thought I would had been same
Time seems flowing with frictionless flow
Moments are galring witn healthy glow
Crow is crowing on the antenna
but not spoiling the charm
It sound like a voice of Hope
Voice of some Happy Arrivals.

I know this peom may not have any poetic value but I adore to write it. It is peice of my past from this house which remain for ever embded in my heart.

Najeeb Ahmed Toronto, Canada. najeeb121@hotmail.com
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Coordinates:   31°54'16"N   74°31'14"E

Comments

  • Good
  • Great expression. wonderful way to keep memories alive.
  • This is heart rendering contribution to one's bithplace. I know Najeeb for last 3 years. I liked this expression.
  • Hi, very nice poetry, please let me know that are you still living in toronto. khalid bukhari
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