Well obviously they're great if you went there. Let's check your sentence above:
I think Martin Middle School has the best educators in the district and it's(spelling: "its" [-5]) reputation has gone down the drain but has work(sp "worked" [-5]) it's(spelling: "its" [-10]) self back up again[Run on sentence -10]. Also(lacking punctuation"," [-5]) the principle(wrong word: "principal" [-10]) (lacking punctuation"," [-5]) and secretaries(lacking punctuation"," [-5]) and teachers(lacking punctuation"," [-5]) and guidence(spelling "guidance" [-5])(incorrect word, placed verb in place of a noun [-10]) is(incorrect formation of sentence: The principal "is", the secretaries and teachers "are", and the guidance "isn't") FANTASTIC!!!!!!!(overuse of punctuation [-10])
If getting 5/100 points is passing, then I do believe Martin Middle School is doing even better than when you had attended.
Here, let me rewrite it for you, too!
I think Martin Middle School has the best educators in the district. Although its reputation has gone down the drain, it has worked its self back up again. Also the teaching, administration, and support staffs are FANTASTIC!
Have a wonderful new year! |